Sam you need to add more to almost every question. Add space between the question and awnser and, bold your questions using [.b] blah blah blah [./b]
( without the period in there) it is a very short app Sam, I also haven’t seen you in game yet so step it up!
[quote=popstarfreas]In order to set a standard for Helper Applications to make sure they look presentable, the format requirements are here to do just that - they are required.
You must:
Provide one line of space between each question
bold each question put in the application using [b ]bold[/b ]
Put the answer to each question on a new line under the question [/quote]
First of all, add A ALOT more to each of your questions. Secondly, bold your questions like Carson just said. Finally, I [colour=red]Rarely[/colour] see you on the server. Actually, I never seen you…!
Note: [quote=sam2130][Q6] Tell us about you?
My name is Sam I am really smart I was a helper on a server before and I am reader good at saying words.[/quote] improve your grammar please. This is one of the errors in your application. Make sure to look over your app and edit.
[colour=red]-1[/colour] because I haven’t seen you on the server before. If you were active, I would of seen you before. Please improve your application. I will read your application again once you edit/revise.
Four things.
One. Your grammar sucks.
Two. If you were active I should be able to see you. Which I haven’t seen you even once
Three. This app is very small.
Four. The questions aren’t even bold-ed.
That is very offensive. Everyone’s grammar isn’t perfect and you shouldn’t be offensive about it. Just simply say “Please improve your grammar” instead of “Your grammar sucks”.
Being a grammar nazi isn’t going to end the world. Go tell that to Tvolk and Rofl because they tell people their grammar isn’t good. If you can’t speak-a da engrish, please use spellcheck and grammarcheck or something. -1 because of lack of detail. Add a few more sentences and you’re good, if you’ve been to the first grade you should be able to write a paragraph.
I thought his grammar wasn’t that bad, a few errors, big deal. when people are like “i am 12 i like teraria and video games i like bascet ball” then it’s like…you suck at grammar. give this guy a break lol
you cant judge a person’s grammar with one sentence…that’s all he wrote. but if he writes a full paragraph and fails horribly, feel free to complain, i get it, i’m a grammar nazi too. being one isnt a bad habit. because then you can speak english
also: i love how zigzagoon man acts like he is a moderator
If you were to give your opinion, you don’t go up to someone’s helper app and say “your grammar sucks”. Instead, you should say “Please improve your grammar”, (As I said before).
Hey Sam, people have already mentioned but still,
improve a-bit your grammar and you must write more on Q3, 4, 5 and 6
since you need to let us see that you are willing to spend for the rank.
Good luck with the application!
Update-
This topic is marked as denied due to inactivity on it
and non-change of the answers.
I saw that you opened new ones, if you open one, stick with it.